obviously written, but cute.
it was what it was.
obviously written, but cute.
it was what it was.
for nimbus,
v when you scaffold what do you sit on? and add to walk across?
bars, ok then.
hey,
Jaleel White = best sonic.
another dope beat, you drop these like nothing.
really glad your so active.
keep it up
why isn't,
that emcee me. D:
word,
I love DOOM, so I can def feel this. Scooby Doo slack jaw, that's the most nonsensical yet dope thing I've heard.
Good to see someone feeling it
I feel like writing to this track,
dope shit, will probably be releasing a track over it.
dope shit,
much respect I want to spit on this beat, check my new shit and let me know whats up.
I really dig this...
The sample on the hook is dope.
the beat is pretty good, it all feels a little quiet, especially the kick and snare.
Yeah it's a bit mellow and it was on a shitty internal mic
well,
this isn't really my style of rap, it was pretty good though.
lyrically you could use some work with the metaphors your trying to make happen sometimes don't click the way you intended, the flow is on for most of it but sometimes your bars are 'underfed' meaning they don't fit the bar parameter and you force the flow a bit. overall it was good. just work on your bar structure and metaphors a bit and you'll definitely have something.
pce.
p.s. not really sure why you wanted MY opinion, but alright.